Very clean design and clear progression of story. The meaningful choices that you laid out were great and I enjoyed going back and trying other options, so it’s very payable. The design is very interesting but I kind of like that you tried something different by using simplified complimentary images like words and punctuations. I think some small sound effects might have complimented this style particularly well, so I’d urge you to give that a try in the future. I had a very interesting moment at the beginning of wondering what I am, then who I am, and it really sent my imagination running, so great job establishing some intrigue right from the start! Lovely game! Well done.
I loved the art in the game! It really added a lot of character to every scene the character went through. Some of the passages get a little wordy or the pacing gets monotonous so watch out for that but overall I think it's a really nice game!
This was so fun. The style of the game is really cool. It's very simple but it works for example; The fact that we described to start out in complete black darkness in this bright white background, it really forces us to imagine ourselves in that spot, getting super in character. The descriptions were very atmospheric. The character interactions were super fun. Good job
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(note: the image for introducing the vampire didn't show up, watch out for that)
i liked the concept for this game, and all the options the game offered !! i noticed that an image on one of the vampire passages didn't show up for me, and the font was a little tough to read at points, but otherwise i really enjoyed it! your writing style worked really well for this game.
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Very clean design and clear progression of story. The meaningful choices that you laid out were great and I enjoyed going back and trying other options, so it’s very payable. The design is very interesting but I kind of like that you tried something different by using simplified complimentary images like words and punctuations. I think some small sound effects might have complimented this style particularly well, so I’d urge you to give that a try in the future. I had a very interesting moment at the beginning of wondering what I am, then who I am, and it really sent my imagination running, so great job establishing some intrigue right from the start! Lovely game! Well done.
really well thought out story building and I like how you've added your own images to it also! (im sure that took a bit)~
the animations for the text is subtle, but so effective for the delivery of your setting too. Nice work!!
I loved the art in the game! It really added a lot of character to every scene the character went through.
Some of the passages get a little wordy or the pacing gets monotonous so watch out for that but overall I think it's a really nice game!
This was so fun. The style of the game is really cool. It's very simple but it works for example; The fact that we described to start out in complete black darkness in this bright white background, it really forces us to imagine ourselves in that spot, getting super in character. The descriptions were very atmospheric. The character interactions were super fun. Good job
spoiler warning:
(note: the image for introducing the vampire didn't show up, watch out for that)
i liked the concept for this game, and all the options the game offered !! i noticed that an image on one of the vampire passages didn't show up for me, and the font was a little tough to read at points, but otherwise i really enjoyed it! your writing style worked really well for this game.